Maria Grazia Painted

So here's the final of the painting of Mario's wife.

A new Picture of Maria Grazia

I got a lot of great feedback from teachers and fellow students on the picture of the wife. Most people feel that she is posing too much and it doesn't look natural and cute. SO here's another picture I was thinking of using.
Comments please! What do you think?

The shop when it opened

Mario back in Italy